La Boheme ch.1. interlude - 7

I can't write Japanese, alright!

Again I can't help but feel I move too quickly, composition-wise, especially in the top panels. I feels as if there should be something between them to show how it goes from the can of water to someone dipping a brush in the water/ash mix. And I can't draw hands. And the perspective looks haywire in the bottom left panel. And this time the artistic liberty I took is not explainable later, anyone who's ever tried painting quickly with watercolour knows that would not happen. And I half-regret not writing in any sound effects.
But other than those things I'm pretty happy with this page. It feels well-balanced and pretty to look at. It also took me a little less than four days to make, rather than the usual five I need. So improving speed is improving.